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Dear Professor, Rosalind M. Chow,
My name is Chenmiao Wei, and I majored in Human Resource Management, graduated in Anhui, Chian. My courses included social psychology, applied psychology, statistics, organizational behavior, management, etc. I am writing to you to ask will you accept Ph.D students for the fall, and if I have the chance to join in your research lab.
Learning from your website, I learned that your research fields focus on social hierarchy and inequality, gender and racial diversity, intergroup relations and intragroup process. Your research paper “Organizational Behavior and Human Decision Processes” indicated how the task relevance resulted cooperative or competitive behaviors in relatively high-status groups and low-status group, and how would the concern for intra-group status mediate these cooperative/competitive behaviors of intra-group behavior. Also, you hypothesized that task relevance influenced the collective outcomes mediated by cooperative collective process. In this experimental study, hypothesis-test method was used and 2 experiments based on self-report scales were conducted, and statistics were analyzed through correlation and analytic hierarchy analyzing methods. Structural equation models were also adopted to test the hypothesis. And the result can definitely shed a light on varies organization managers in choosing managing strategies.
My research interest matches yours, and below are some of the studies I’ve done and or still being working for:
Papers:
• University Student Burnout Study Based on Learning Methods and Teacher’s Immediacy Behavior. An Experimental Research. (2016)
• Research on The Relation Between Perceived Organizational Support and Teacher’s Burnout. The Mediation Influence of Self-Efficacy (2017).
• Encouraging the Low-carbon Tourism: How Perceived Value and Reference Groups Affect People’s Choice? (2016).
• Research on Cultivating College Students’ Entrepreneurial Ability —The Case of Business Administration of Huainan Normal University of Anhui China. (2017)
I personally conducted the majority of these researches independently, and because I was at school, students and teachers were the main object for me. In these studies, I adopted field study, case study, self-report and literature review to collect and analysis statistics to test hypothesis. I’ve learned how important it is to assure the accuracy of the study methods and the source of the statistics, the right researchers to work with, the appropriate publications to choose and so forth. It is a great challenge to do researches and specially to make a trenchant one, but I am always enjoying the process.
Professor Rosalind M. Chow, I am really interested in your research field and I wish I may have a chance to have further communication with you.
Thanks for your precious time! Please contact me with this E-mail address, and I will be glad and honest about any question you may have with me.

Sincerely, yours,
Chenmiao Wei

提问者: Romiya纯粹 2017-08-11 21:36

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jackyoung337 2017-08-20 14:25

看了几眼,开头就有语法错误,怎么会中?“I am writing to you to ask will you accept..."这句话你再看看。
最好找个英语专业的或者老外帮你对一遍,我实在看不下去。

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nenerere 2017-08-12 06:08

我是觉得你首先要有一定的量,才能说中不中,老师根本就不招学生,认不认真都无所谓的。其次我是觉得太长,就算老师先招人,这么长的内容看着就头疼,你的很多内容比如选课,文章,直接附加cv就可以了,简单介绍一下自己的情况,老师有兴趣会看你cv,cv要清楚一些。这样写的很乱的。不过我是理科生,不知道文科是不是也是这样。

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